DEAR DOLL

DEAR DOLL

 

Dear doll; from where you are coming?

You are looking cute in that pink dress;

With one hand little blue umbrella is dancing

Though another is busy with Hakusen

 

Dear doll; a special smile is playing on your face

What is the secret of your bright eyes?

They are wandering, from one spot to another place

It seems you have got something priceless prise.

 

Yes! I am undeniably happy with my solitude

For now I was in hallow universe of love;

That love, which every time was hurting my attitude

I said, “Go to hell”; and now I feel top of above.

_____ saddam husen

06/04/2015

©saddamhusen2015

Author's Note

Hakusen= Japanese Hand fan

Reviews

[Confuser]

Saddam: Sounds like you got burnt pretty badly...and poetry is a wonderful way of expressing that pain. I hope you've recovered.....do like my Dad told me, don't look for the pretty ones. He said, "Find an Ugly Man, he'll treat you well." Seriously he did and chuckled. Nice poem, and with lines like I am undeniably happy with my solitude tells me you felt just the opposite. Thank you...Dale

[Saddam]

that's great. Thank you so much for this wonderful review.

[Confuser]

You're welcome!....Dale

[Penny]

Well the doll is just like me.. Lol. Anyway, nice poem

[Girl With A Pen]

Yes! I am undeniably happy with my solitude
For now I was in hallow universe of love;

Wonderful poem. It seems you speak solely from the heart.

[MomzillaNC]

Seems someone broke your heart, exposing their own emptiness.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

YVW :D

[costa siwale]

Ha! This is a nice piece. I enjoyed reading it. Good work

[Saddam]

Thanks friend. So long time it is.

[costa siwale]

Yes, I have been off line, am back now

[Saddam]

A warm welcome friend..

[613]

This is such a sweet poem! Well done.

- Brittney

If you wouldn't mind, could you please check out my novel, HIM? I'd truly appreciate it! (:

[Saddam]

Of course dear.... It's pleasant of mine.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Wording made for great imagery,
I could definitely feel the emotions
in this piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Saddam]

thank you so much dear friend..

[MsJewel]

Powerful words. Great imagery and very well written :) Julie

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear..

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Lovely poem Saddam... good work

[Saddam]

Thank you bro..

[Lyndy]

Wow, a poem about a doll. Nice one! I love it. :D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear