BONDS

Little write about woman empowerment

BONDS.................................... by Saddam Husen

We are strong enough to challenge you

In any way,

In every field,

But you made bonds

To make yourself Superior.

Author's Note

For WOMEN DAY............. I salute their divine Power.

Reviews

[nazia]

First of all thank you for a poem on Women.. I liked the way you salute the bond prevailed here.... but there s just one thing I would like to add there is no need of giving any superior position to women. just treat them equal with dignity and the job is done :)
Good write.. keep it up

[Saddam]

I am not making them as you think. I mean they believe in giving and never expect for reward, My mother is great example of this. It is divine... Without them where is the world? Actually you are true... Treated them equally is true respect of their, but how could we do that because of our pride!!!

[nazia]

Well changes come with time and I hope things do change in the future :)

[Saddam]

Sure..... thanks......

[Saddam]

Time is changing.............

[Mila]

Thank you for this, from women everywhere. This speaks volumes for the changes that are slowly happening in society. Well done!!

[Saddam]

Thank you.............

[Patricia]

Very true and well written!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much..

[Lyndy]

Well said and well described. I love it! :D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.........

[Kamari's]

I agree there is an uprising in women which should be taken note of

[Saddam]

Thanks for have look on it dear.....

[Kamari's]

Anytime :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Sweet little gem... I wish everyone thinks like you... Every day belongs to women... not this day.... Kuddos for your thoughts mate

[Saddam]

Thank you so much..... Yes I think so similar.

[MsJewel]

A wonderful tribute to the strength of a woman. We can be quite powerful!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend....

[RubyOmma]

simple and good. I'd like to hear more.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much..........

[Sami Khalil]

Bonds are powerful and are hallmark of strong relationships. You are empowering women to make bonds...Bravo, sir...:).................

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir........... I mean It is great.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Saddam]

( '..' ).................smiles..............

[Sami Khalil]

:)...............................

[Elisa]

I'm really touched that you decided to write an empowering message for women. That's really noble and compassionate of you. I would just change some words around the make the message even clearer:
"We are strong enough to challenge you
In any way
In every field
But you made bonds
To make yourself superior"
I hope this was basically the same thing you said. If you write it this way, it makes it clearer who the poem is addressed to, and the perspective from which the poem is written. If not, I'm so sorry and keep it the way you did it :) anyway, I hope this helps!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend Elisa... It was really a thought of rhythmic but at last I post it so. Thanks again for this wonderful review.

[Elisa]

Oh i see! I think there's still a rhythm to it, but in my personal opinion, the message of the poem and its clarity are the most important things. Have a great day!

[Saddam]

Thanks dear..........

[Jeyanthi]

Well stated. :)

Its great that you noticed that women are naturally equipped with Divine powers.

If superman, why not superwomen? :P

[Saddam]

Why not..... Thank you very much dear friend...