Who is LUCKY

Who is LUCKY

A Chapter by Saddam
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Who is LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Who is LUCKY

by saddam husen

 

I saw a cute rich BOY

Holding his father’s hand-

Was in fancy and clean dress

He was happy with his presents;

I asked, “What is in your bag?”

He answered in joyful tone

“Toffees, chocolates and lots of cake”.

 

I saw a cobbler BOY

Holding brush and dye in his hand

Was in old and dirty clothes

He was calling peoples

I asked, “What is in your bag?”

He answered in satisfactory way

“Books, copies, pencil and pen”.



© 2015 Saddam


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I like this... it shows that raw truth of life..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
This is humorous to me of real life

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear friend.
awe short and meaningful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thanks friend.......
I love it! Different people from various walks of life are satisfied with different things! ;) Nice one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear Lyndy.
Such differing values illustrated here, the happiness and satisfaction between the rich and the poor. Nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
The contrast is stark, but aptly shows that wealth isn't in the coin, but in the value of our own choosing. You're poem plays out the contrast between rich and poor, yet calls into question what is the true wealth. Treats and trinkets may be materially alluring, but lasting wealth is found in our intellect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend for your review.
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

yw :)
You deliver a good message, sir. Always Bravo...........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir, Your support is reward for me.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......
a most excellent observational piece, my friend...
... concise & written with much truth
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thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend.
great social portrait! brief but effective!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
"Peoples"? Did you mean "people"? And I'm not quite sure I understood what you were trying to say? Both boys are happy, although they're completely different? Please, let me know.

As for the poem itself, it's nice and fluent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

That's may be People. Thank you so much for you suggestion and attention friend.

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