LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

Inspired from the Rihanna's song

LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

It’s all right

‘cause I like the way you hurt

It’s all right

‘cause I love the way you lie.

 

On the first page of our story

The future seemed so bright

Then this things turned out so evil

I don’t know why I’m still surprised.

Glasses were shattered from the fight,

I try to run but I don’t wanna ever leave.

(This stanza is taken from the original song )

 

Even one inch distance

Feel me and scatter me into tense

You promised me; never be severe

We swore for our true adore.

Then you made this wall high

You never listen my sobs and cry.

 

I was in you, deep down

Even I forget of my own

You said, “I love you most

I want you close; just.”

I forgot that last night

“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.

Reviews

[RubyOmma]

this is really beautiful. I was in you, deep down
Even I forget of my own
You said, “I love you most
I want you close; just.”
I forgot that last night
“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.
This is my favorite part. Please read my poem Iian also. It is similar I think, thanks. :)

[Saddam]

I will dear, Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

"You never listen my sobs and cry.

I was in you, deep down
Even I forget of my own"

Sad and touching in all its hurt and lies. Bravo, sir for the exposing...:)................

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Sir for this empowering in me.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Many songs cause me to think and sometimes to write about them.
Love can do that too.
perspective is needed and cherished to cope with the hurt.
Truth can surface and blow those most touching moments
away, and speak to the brain instead of the heart.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear, You are too kind.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

This song is very close to my heart.I've sweet memories with it !:)
Thanks for choosing it to write!
Loved it with all my heart : )

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear............. I am very much glad to hear you.

[Ishita Dixit]

I love this song a lot!
And i liked your take on it.
Nicely done! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear for this encouragement.

[Ishita Dixit]

You're welcome!

[katja]

"I forget of my own"
*
we invest so much of ourselves in relationships that often we become an extention of the person we love...
... to our detriment, to theirs when tragedy strikes & the frailty of our emotions are stripped away by lies & harsh truths
*
a poignant & relatable write, my friend. thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina

[Saddam]

Thank you very much My dear friend...............

[Chris]

Some understandings transcend language or nationality...

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Sir.

[Chris]

Anytime my friend

[BlackRose]

Great take on the song. I really liked it.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much.