LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

Inspired from the Rihanna's song

LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

It’s all right

‘cause I like the way you hurt

It’s all right

‘cause I love the way you lie.

 

On the first page of our story

The future seemed so bright

Then this things turned out so evil

I don’t know why I’m still surprised.

Glasses were shattered from the fight,

I try to run but I don’t wanna ever leave.

(This stanza is taken from the original song )

 

Even one inch distance

Feel me and scatter me into tense

You promised me; never be severe

We swore for our true adore.

Then you made this wall high

You never listen my sobs and cry.

 

I was in you, deep down

Even I forget of my own

You said, “I love you most

I want you close; just.”

I forgot that last night

“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.

Reviews

[RubyOmma]

this is really beautiful. I was in you, deep down
Even I forget of my own
You said, “I love you most
I want you close; just.”
I forgot that last night
“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.
This is my favorite part. Please read my poem Iian also. It is similar I think, thanks. :)

[Saddam]

I will dear, Thank you so much.

[stars are far]

That was so well written poem, sad one, but it is true, to many of us.
And i think that song is inspiring because it speaks beyond words, it have actions said by Rihanna. well done in expressing this :)

[Avinash]

This one is quite innovative in terms of presentation and content. I enjoyed reading it.

[Jennesis]

i connected with the line "i love the way you lie" so often we get sucked in by another, we think we are in love with them, even when they do not speak the truth.

[Prabha Salimath]

You are so creative SSADD I liked it.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Lyndy]

oh, this is beautiful and very creative. I like it! :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear, I am glad.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Playful and a perfect homage to the talented Rihanna, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend....

[MomzillaNC]

It's too easy to loose ourselves in a relationship. Ultimately, that will only hurt the relationship. The best way to honor any relationship is through loyalty and honesty; honesty become impossible if we abrogate ourselves -- and without honesty, true loyalty is not possible.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend. You are right.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a brilliant write, structured well. :-)

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Anytime. :-)

[Tiana]

This is a wonderfully written poem that I can certainly relate to, SSADD ...

[Saddam]

So nice it is, Thank you very much.

[MsJewel]

"I love the way you lie" - unfortunately words I can relate to...we all want to love and be loved...telling our hearts to ignore the little signs that tell us this love isn't real. And when it is over, would we change it, perhaps not.
Your poem is heartfelt and lovely my friend

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.....................