LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

Inspired from the Rihanna's song

LOVE THE WAY YOU LIE

It’s all right

‘cause I like the way you hurt

It’s all right

‘cause I love the way you lie.

 

On the first page of our story

The future seemed so bright

Then this things turned out so evil

I don’t know why I’m still surprised.

Glasses were shattered from the fight,

I try to run but I don’t wanna ever leave.

(This stanza is taken from the original song )

 

Even one inch distance

Feel me and scatter me into tense

You promised me; never be severe

We swore for our true adore.

Then you made this wall high

You never listen my sobs and cry.

 

I was in you, deep down

Even I forget of my own

You said, “I love you most

I want you close; just.”

I forgot that last night

“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.

Reviews

[RubyOmma]

this is really beautiful. I was in you, deep down
Even I forget of my own
You said, “I love you most
I want you close; just.”
I forgot that last night
“I LOVE YOU”- when you say to me.
This is my favorite part. Please read my poem Iian also. It is similar I think, thanks. :)

[Saddam]

I will dear, Thank you so much.

[armin]

Eminem is a great rapper though I don't like rihanna's music much.
Okay coming over to your write. It is an amazing work, the use of mind in the poem is beyond brilliance, loved the format and the way you've written it.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

very very very nicely written

[Jamestown]

Really nice piece, I enjoyed reading this and the format is very
unique adds originality to the piece as a whole. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kamari's]

Getting new glasses until then write bigger so I can review hehe but very good it's a beautiful write

[Sophy Freebirds]

I am not a great fan of love poems my friend.But as it is a poem on the end of a relationship i can feel the desperate pain which the poet is in... thanks for dropping by my page :)

~Sophy

[Tania]

Wow ! Beautifully written ...

[Rachelle]

Deception comes in many forms. Sometimes, others lie to us. Other times, we refuse to accept the truth and lie to ourselves.

[Patricia]

Your writing style and word use is so beautiful please keep it up!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and sad.


so much emotions here thank you for
sharing and for stopping by my page.


God bless. Benita