STRANGE AADAT

Red lips, Rosy chicks

Light misty eye like a few on petals

Upon them, your Muskurana

It is making me worried

Who will rescue this Zamana.

 

Glass on your red-rag nose

Always playful, springy pigtail

Your various kind of Baat

Never understood, but listen till the end

I like it, your strange Aadat.

 

Love for the rain

            Happy even in little serein;

Wander at your Darr

But a smile sweet, then after.

©saddamhusen@2015 

Author's Note

Hindi words and its meaning
Muskurana = Smile
Zamana = the World
Baat = Talk
Aadat = Nature, Habit
Darr = Fear

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Glass on your red-rag nose

Always playful, springy pigtail

Your various kind of Baat

Never understood, but listen till the end

I like it, your strange Aadat.


Beautiful and lovely with the mix
of languages.


Thank you for stopping by my page
and for your kind review and comments
I know you believe in Karma.



Take care god bless. Benita

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend. Can I join you there?

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

sure I'll add you and a Admin can accept you I will message Marcella she is a admin an done of my friends on FACEBOOK.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome :)

[Deepika]

Cute one :) Liked the way you've blend the languages.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend for your time and tune.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful poetry.
Love how you've meshed the languages.
:)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.

[Lyndy]

I like this poem, it reminds me about the beauty of nature. ^^

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow what a beautiful and sweet poem!

[Sami Khalil]

Strange adaat indeed sir to some.
There are similar words in Arabic:
Zaman: Our period of time or world.
Aadat: Habits or traditions.
Kalam: Talk.
Ibtisama: Smils.
Excellent, sir...:)......

[Saddam]

Thank you so much sir. You have given me lots of things, currently these new words. Great Sir. Always pleasure to have you Sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[katja]

i love when a writer blends two languages to accentuate both theme & imagery in a piece...
... you have also taught me a new word tonight "serein" which is always a treat for me

thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Dear, I am glad hear that.