STRANGE AADAT

Red lips, Rosy chicks

Light misty eye like a few on petals

Upon them, your Muskurana

It is making me worried

Who will rescue this Zamana.

 

Glass on your red-rag nose

Always playful, springy pigtail

Your various kind of Baat

Never understood, but listen till the end

I like it, your strange Aadat.

 

Love for the rain

            Happy even in little serein;

Wander at your Darr

But a smile sweet, then after.

©saddamhusen@2015 

Author's Note

Hindi words and its meaning
Muskurana = Smile
Zamana = the World
Baat = Talk
Aadat = Nature, Habit
Darr = Fear

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Glass on your red-rag nose

Always playful, springy pigtail

Your various kind of Baat

Never understood, but listen till the end

I like it, your strange Aadat.


Beautiful and lovely with the mix
of languages.


Thank you for stopping by my page
and for your kind review and comments
I know you believe in Karma.



Take care god bless. Benita

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend. Can I join you there?

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

sure I'll add you and a Admin can accept you I will message Marcella she is a admin an done of my friends on FACEBOOK.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

i liked your way nd this poem very much .

[The dark story]

I read it over and over again…it flows very smoothly and elegantly. I liked the indian toucj in it,makes it more endearing and shows a touch of your heart. A very sweet poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Roshan Nair]

Great write saddam, the mix of language was the cream of it all..liked it! :) cheers

[Saddam]

Shukriya bhai.....

[Sindu]

Such a fun to read. Brought a muskuran to my lips :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much. I can say to you Dhanyawad.....

[Sindu]

Ur welcome :)

[child of God]

Interesting writ. The mix of languages. Gives it a nice touch

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. Glad you like it.

[Rachelle]

Mix the languages and improve the flavor of the content...

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.... Appreciate your words.

[Amorette Duvannes]

Upon them, your Muskurana
It is making me worried
Who will rescue this Zamana.

The mix of two languages gives the poem a really nice pace and makes it seem all the more articulated and well expressed. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Quite unique, one must re-read this to feel it's full power, well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend....

[Ana B.]

Great work and it has this uniqueness from blending the languages :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear poet, I am honored.