You Are The One

Reviews

[The dark story]

Saying "elegant" wouldnt do justice for this splendid writing. I was stuck to it till the very end..the very first line captivated me and smile came after reading the rest.

"My heart beats and it music
Cant live without one another"

"My core and your beat
My step and your feet"

I really liked the above lines. For me, it flows like a mellifluous music warming the heart.
It is a very beautiful romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Glad you like it.

[The dark story]

You are most welcome. It's a pleasure to read your work.

[Saddam]

Thanks dear.

[Sami Khalil]

A romantic to the bones. You do it so lovely. Pen on to fame...:).....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir. Always bring smiles your words. Thanks for it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome always...:).....

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Loved the melody of the poem...they way your words flowed down with a gorgeous presence of love .Beautiful !

[Saddam]

Thank you very much my beloved poet. It is honor.