You Are The One

Reviews

[The dark story]

Saying "elegant" wouldnt do justice for this splendid writing. I was stuck to it till the very end..the very first line captivated me and smile came after reading the rest.

"My heart beats and it music
Cant live without one another"

"My core and your beat
My step and your feet"

I really liked the above lines. For me, it flows like a mellifluous music warming the heart.
It is a very beautiful romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Glad you like it.

[The dark story]

You are most welcome. It's a pleasure to read your work.

[Saddam]

Thanks dear.

[Barbz]

A tale about forever love, very plain to see. I lived this life, free of strife, His last dance was with me. Barbz

[Gee]

Sweet,liked,nay enjoyed this.Good work

[Sami Khalil]

Keep it up , sir...:)........................

[T. Adams]

"My core and your beat, my step by your feet." I'll remember that line forever. It should be put to music.

[B. Hudson]

really like this, keep it up!

[Amorette Duvannes]

Love this and the connection between love and nature. Very beautiful, and so inspiring! :)

[Matching Socks]

So beautiful and heartfelt SSADD. :)
I just love seeing this in your handwriting, a nice personal touch.

[MomzillaNC]

Passionate write.

NOTES: "serge" is "a durable twilled woolen or worsted fabric." I think you meant "surge"

[Vanesa Markovic]

A beautiful poem and a spectacular visual presentation.
You're blessed to have such clear handwriting, haha.
Very nice work!
-VM

[brezybaby3]

I like it. such a sweet love poem

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear poet.

[brezybaby3]

Your are so very welcome