SILENCE....

SILENCE....

By saddam husen

 

Listen the silence

Silence has a voice

It is not so usual but real.

 

Hear the silence

Silence speaks mutely

It is true and only original.

 

Feel the silent story

There are many layers in it

Every layer has a new stable.

 

When you’ll be able to read silence

When you’ll be understand those tears

You’ll be the hero for dear one.

 

If you want to know the reality

Go and find silence

And talk to yourself all the way.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

It's true. Much is communicated in the silences. Maybe the reason people seem to feel the need to fill the silences with so much noise is that they're afraid of the silences. Somehow, silence has come to be equated with loneliness. Yet, in the silences, we find ourselves and the divine.

NOTES:
"Listen the silence" I recommend "Listen… the silence" or "Listen [to] the silence"

"When you’ll understand those tears"

"You’ll be the hero for dear one." I recommend "You’ll be the hero, dear one." or "You’ll be the hero for [a] dear one."

[Saddam]

Definitely they will be as you are suggesting. Thanks friend for being so kind, It will be most helpful. Thanks again.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Prashant Pandey]

silence is voice of soul. if you can understand that means u r attached with someone's soul. nice words.

[RubyOmma]

It reminds me of meditation, is that the inspiration?
J

[Saddam]

You can say........... Thank you so much.

[Lyndy]

Nice one! Your poem is really inspiring. :D

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend....

[MsJewel]

Silence is golden...
Lovely writing my friend

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Deepika]

Speech is silver, silence is gold. Though silence is not easy to decode, sometimes they are much effective than the words. Good one:)

[Saddam]

tHaNk YoU sO MuCh dEAr fRiEnD.

[Patricia]

"And talk to yourself all the way" what a great way to finish. very well done, nice flow!

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.... I'm glad hear that.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Excellent poem and also loved the picture you have added here. Unique!☺

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

You're welcome! :D

[Sami Khalil]

I like how you included your handwritten copy. You have a good one as your poems, sir...:).......

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Roshan Nair]

Silence has a meaning, it is only for those that realize it without anyone need it to be pointed out :) lovely piece man. cheers

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.