CALM HEART’S DESIRE

CALM HEART’S DESIRE

By saddam husen

 

I was always around you

But you respond as I was not existed

The moment, when you was upset

I spend all my day arrested.

 

I was looking you thousand

And wanted only reflection from the moisture eyes

Ah! You turned down me for him

I hate that time;

When you accepted his proposal,

 

I never disclose my fantasies

The dream; which always I have been seen

Foolish I was, ah! That blinding me now

That dream; which, now, it has not any mean.

 

I am expressing what I have

Because I still love you; more than love

Now I am in heaven, all above

Happy I am, in calm heart, no pain is allowed.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I never disclose my fantasies
The dream; which always I have been seen
Foolish I was, ah! That blinding me now
That dream; which, now, it has not any mean.

I am expressing what I have"

You are an impressionable and valuable writer. You lay it like a truth...:)............

[Saddam]

It is great honor for me Sir, Dhanyawad, thank you very much Sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Jamestown]

Well expressed piece of work, I really enjoyed the last stanza it definitely
would have an impact on anyone with half a heart! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Faultless measured with a most significant message.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear poet...........

[anne]

I am expressing what I have
Because I still love you; more than love
Now I am in heaven, all above
Happy I am, in calm heart, no pain is allowed.....
such a beautiful poem...:))

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Love binds one to the reading with power, well done, good read.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I am expressing what I have

Because I still love you; more than love

Now I am in heaven, all above

Happy I am, in calm heart, no pain is allowed.




very beautiful my friend.


Thank you for stopping by my page
and for this lovely poem.



God bless. Benita

[Eagergreen]

The swapping of tenses was a little dizzying but I think I got enough to say I sympathize with the speaker's pain

[Saddam]

Thank you my friend.......... Soon that will be right. Thnks for reading and reviewing it.

[Eagergreen]

I love to read them helps me expand