BHARAT KI YUWATI

BHARAT KI YUWATI

A Chapter by Saddam



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very deep thoughts....nice and impressive (Y)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Sach mein.. Apni zuban hi jazbaat ko itni achi tarah bayaan kar sakti hai. Bahot khoob, dil chhune wali air sonchne par majboor karne wali yeah nazm likhne ke liye bahot shukriya...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Behtareen.... Bohot hi accha likha hai..
Evry word is relatable. kuch bhi aisa nahi hai jis se khud ko link na kiya ja sake.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Dhanyawad..................
Your Hindi poetry is immensely beautiful and so is your handwriting. This poem is very appropriate for our social conditions. I loved the choice of words and the message it wanted to convey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend. Aap ki upasthiti bada sukun deta hai...
I need a translation. :)
Very cool though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


After a long time I read something in Hindi here in cafe, we all know everything about the conditions of women in India, and I feel education and employment is the only way to empowerment of women, a nicely written piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


aaj k haalat par bhut zabardasht kataash.... bhut badiya Saddam ji... bhut acche

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

full poem is outstanding . second paragraph is mine favourite

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A real scenario, it's really true. "Andhera chhodo Ujaalo se" was best one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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