SNOW-WHITE and SEVEN DWARFS -1

Snow-white and seven Little Dwarfs

PART  --  I

“Looking-glass, who in this world is the fairest than me?”

Proudly and haughty queen one day call

She was satisfied and faithful with glass, got answered-

“Thou art fair but snow-white is fairer than all.”

 

It was not expected; she turned yellow and green with envy

The envy was uncontrolled and she had no peace day and night,

She called a huntsman, took her over to him for kill

And ordered, ‘bring her lungs and liver as token before my sight.’

 

He was about to kill her but got pity as Snow was beautiful

She pray huntsman to leave her life, she will run away

He cut out a bear’s lung and liver as proof of girl’s death

Wicked queen ate them, and thought Snow is no longer stay.

 

Little feet Snow run all day long even to the late evening

Apart from the land, over the hills she found a little dwell

It was seven dwarfs house, and neater and cleaner than can be told

Ate some food with tiny plates and at little bed for a rest she fell.

 

‘Everything has ruined’, said all the seven dwarfs with astonishment

They found a beautiful girl lying on their bed

They did’nt disturbed her and slept with his companions

At the morning, when Snow-white awoke, she got frightened.

 But good soul dwarfs let Snow-white stayed with them

Other side; wicked lady was happy, no one is beautiful as she herself

But soon she knew that Snow is alive and happy

Envy let her have no rest, she plan to kill Snow herself.

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Beautiful..It's really praise worthy how you turn stories into poetries ..I loved the rhythm and flow ,Wonderful work!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend......

[AYVID N]

Very well narrated Ssadd. One of your best writes till date. Much appreciated.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend........ I am glad you like it.

[Prabha Salimath]

SSAD you have got a talent writing story in poetry, which is quite hard for beautifully written,
I want to know why she is frightened when she woke up. Simply asking this is one of my favourate fairy tale, let me know if any rather reason you have.

[Saddam]

Soon I will post the second Part then you will understand. It is very usual why she got frightened, you know the truth. Thank You for reading and reviewing.

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Mary Steffen]

Very good write! Very much with the story. It is very creative and the writing is good.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend......... Glad at your reach and read.

[Matching Socks]

One of my favourite tales in poetic form, nicely done SSADD.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear...........