WE’LL BE CLOSER, FOREVER

WE’LL BE CLOSER, FOREVER

 

SUMMER, MONSOON OR COLD WINTER

WE WILL BE CLOSE FOREVER, TOGETHER.

 

Under the shades of daises tree only

You, our surround and I

Holding me in your arms tighter

I want to feel your beat so closer.

 

Beyond my world, I am here for you

For the star nights and lighten sun

Give me poise, as I got tear whenever

Sing me a lullaby, muffle me in adore.

 

COME ALONG, LET WALK FOR A SAUNTER

AT THE END OF RIVER, ON THE ABABASTER. 

Reviews

[John Anderson]

I love this poem, I love the emotional intensity in it.

[yuki]

''holding me in your arms tighter, i want to feel your beat so closer''
this line is what kept me reading because everyone want to feel that certain persons heart beat.
nicely done :)

[Frieda P]

Sweetly ethereal SSADD, a whimsical lullaby for an adored one.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for sharing this piece I can relate too

[Matching Socks]

Stunning, beautiful piece my friend! I love this one. :)

[raj24]

nice one buddy... loved it all the way....:)

Raj

[Anne Timmins]

A thoughtful, deeply moving and powerful poem...

[AprilRN1210]

beautiful and heartfelt.. you feel the longing for love and the sweet hope that you have found it in another.. well done..

[Rene Salinas]

A kind expression of togetherness and it seems to take you away in fact the line, I want to feel your beat so closer threatens with the possibility of you loosing your individuality. As you continue to emphasize that your love will not hold back and as capitalization comes to indicate that you are in no way shape or form scared of making your love for the other grow so strong that it might as well take the other over.

In danger of becoming intoxicating

Thankyou for the invite.