WE’LL BE CLOSER, FOREVER

WE’LL BE CLOSER, FOREVER

 

SUMMER, MONSOON OR COLD WINTER

WE WILL BE CLOSE FOREVER, TOGETHER.

 

Under the shades of daises tree only

You, our surround and I

Holding me in your arms tighter

I want to feel your beat so closer.

 

Beyond my world, I am here for you

For the star nights and lighten sun

Give me poise, as I got tear whenever

Sing me a lullaby, muffle me in adore.

 

COME ALONG, LET WALK FOR A SAUNTER

AT THE END OF RIVER, ON THE ABABASTER. 

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautiful poem. very strongly covays emotion. well done

[Rheeca Verons]

it's been long since i've been online...and this is what I saw immediately...

I kind of interpreted this poem as a goodbye to a love one... So full of emotions, I literrally picture every thing on my mind while reading this...It's a sad but lovely ending.

-rheeca

[Jamil Isimbabi]

hmm very romantic poem. ssad

[Sunya]

Well written and with a lot of feelings :)
-Sunya

[Indian Ink]

I love micro poetry and is this awesome!!! Keep writing!
Indian Ink (Nayanika)

[Ashira Macy]

Very sweet poem my friend, well done.

[MsJewel]

Simply lovely my friend!

:) Julie

[Naina]

wow thats really very beautiful creation ssadd..... it conveys true feelings......:)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I am so glad to have discovered your work! most impressive to read

[Avinash]

SAAD, your feelings and emotions are immensely beautiful and you have passion for writing. One very friendly suggestion. Don't play with words..let the words play with you..I am sure you can deliver a masterpiece.