MEELAN

MEELAN

A Poem by Saddam
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Meelan is an Indian name. It is derived from a Sanskrit expression meaning "coming together".

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MEELAN

A walk in the evening, you and I

Sitting at the bench of beach

Seeing the sun, going down into the sea

As flowing water touching our feet.

 

Setting sun making shadow on the water

Sands reflect its flash and sparks

Tints pranks on her cheeks and shimmer

Soft breeze of west making her slacks.

 

Her hair dancing with air

She tries to put it under left ear

But spate of flow vagaries her heart

Then she turns toward me and whisper ­"

 

LOOK AT "MEELAN" OF EARTH AND SUN

BETWEEN THEM, THERE IS NONE, NO ONE.

© 2014 Saddam


Author's Note

Saddam
Meelan is also a name used in Romance- speaking Europe owing to its Ancient Roman meaning of "eager and laborious".

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lovely poem Ssadd, I enjoyed it

Posted 10 Years Ago


A lovely walk and poem. Her cheeks shimmer as your words glow. Bravo, sir...:).......

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir. you presence make it more special and good. Thanks for reading and reviewing .. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

MY pleasure. Any time...:)......................
This sets a serene and precious mood but for the life of me I cannot find the definition of the word "Meelan"? Can you help me here so that I may receive the full meaning of what you write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

MEELAN is a hindi word that means a heart full of love is deeply entwine with lover. You must googli.. read more
Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

yeah, I went to the online dictionary.
lovely poem..... :) emotions flow without any effort... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the concept of it.. the similarities. The setting sun and the sea.. As morning merges to night two souls are in delight.. This concept of yang and ying symbolized as lovers is good.. keep writing friend .Yes the meelan- meeting of them is dive...

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


I admire the analogy of this 'Meelan' with nature.



Posted 10 Years Ago


wow....very creative and nice thought process......

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very beautiful and creative thought process. You did wonders here Ssadd.

Posted 10 Years Ago


meeting of earth and sun.. a moment that cant be compared with anything.. i loved the way you talked about two lovers and than to show their moment of togetherness with that of earth and sun.. good one Husen :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


raj24

10 Years Ago

Husen sir.. I have already read it.. its a beautiful poem.. thanks for read request :)

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you buddy.... and I am not a Sir.... it is honor but I am still leaning, specially grammer iss.. read more

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Added on August 1, 2014
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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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