MY LAST WORDS...

MY LAST WORDS...

A Poem by Saddam

© 2014 Saddam


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This is so beautifully expressed and heartfelt.
Loss is very hard. You've captured the emotions well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


so sad last stanza but a nice poem...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice write, although sad... I liked the concept to write it in own handwriting and publish it..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would first like to say that you have the prettiest hand writing I have seen in a long time. The poem was beautiful and painful, you wear your heart on your sleeve in this and that adds to the grief felt by your audience for your loss. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Is this your writing? It shows a strong heart. Dreamy at times, but determined in facing what life presents you with. There is a sense of kindness and open sadness, or empathy. Be the strong one you are, and have always been.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful message in this wonderfully written poem. Great wonderful poem!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Heartfelt words of grief, my friend, You are incomplete without the love in your life, I truly hope it aren't your last words, though, for I enjoy everything you bring us. But if so, I would understand. Well penned.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


You could really express your sadness beautifully my friend Ssadd. And what makes a poet great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saddam

10 Years Ago

I don't know!!!! smiles..... Great thanks to you dear.
AYVID N

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome and I look forward to more.
You could really express your sadness beautifully my friend Ssadd. And what makes a poet great.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Saddam
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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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