MY LAST WORDS...

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

This is incredibly moving...a sad and tragic story which you've driven home with some beautiful imagery and piercing introspection...I find myself reflecting on this couple, wondering how they got to this point, what happened to her, what will happen to him...this one went straight to the heart...great piece :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

well crafted and direct, nice write

[yuki]

very good piece and love the ending of this :)

[Cory Barrett]

Devastation some how fashioned as elegance.

[Ruth]

This is beautifully delivered and left an ache hon, beautiful x

[Rene Salinas]

A confession of missing someone through words and the added graphic element that brings a desire for anlogue closer to natural and organic feel in a combined artistic message. I don't want to seem rude or out of place but as I get invited I feel compelled to be honest. As I work in IT all manners of creativity that ultimately only result in showing yet another trick of the mechanical mind are not ammusing to me. Even if after a week of binary trickery you would have posted a theme worth of winning a modern art all software allowed competition. The question I am left with.
Does the digital manifestation add or take from the pure feeling you had for that other human being?

Thanks again for the invite.

[Anne Timmins]

So cleverly fashioned! There seems to be no limit to your inventiveness.

[Eve Ola]

though sad but it done in very beautiful way.. But my world is nothing without you.. i can relate too. Thanks for sharing

[Aayushi]

it is a beautiful and touching poem.

[Dindella]

This poem is so beautiful, but sad. If you are truly going through loss right now, I am sorry. . . I know that is a hard thing to recover from from experience. God be with you, dear.