MY LAST WORDS...
A Poem by
Saddam
© 2014 Saddam
Reviews
Beautiful words from a heart to his dead girl friend
Nicely penned but I suggest to keep her alive in that heart forever.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
i will my friend and she is...... thank you very much....
10 Years Ago
you're welcome.
So moving I can't say more
Posted 10 Years Ago
So moving I can't say more
beautiful write ssad, you write touching romantic pieces you shouldn't change
Posted 10 Years Ago
beautiful write ssad, you write touching romantic pieces you shouldn't change
This one is a touching piece Ssad...very well written!
Posted 10 Years Ago
This one is a touching piece Ssad...very well written!
I really enjoyed the read! I like that you posted a photo of your penmanship with the piece. It makes it even more personal and touching!
~Stefanie
Posted 10 Years Ago
I really enjoyed the read! I like that you posted a photo of your penmanship with the piece. It makes it even more personal and touching!
~Stefanie
This is really good, well done :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is really good, well done :)
Brilliant. Just enjoyed!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Brilliant. Just enjoyed!!!
First of all, why is your penmanship so perfect? Trade me. Also, very beautiful poem. I loved it. Thank you for sharing :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
First of all, why is your penmanship so perfect? Trade me. Also, very beautiful poem. I loved it. Thank you for sharing :)
Bittersweet and beautiful. You have touched my heart.
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
Bittersweet and beautiful. You have touched my heart.
:) Julie
So beautifully written.... Seriously very heart touching poem...... When you love someone and if that person leaves you then it really hurts a lot and that can be seen through your poem, if perfectly conveys your feelings....... Keep writing..:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
So beautifully written.... Seriously very heart touching poem...... When you love someone and if that person leaves you then it really hurts a lot and that can be seen through your poem, if perfectly conveys your feelings....... Keep writing..:)
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Added on July 31, 2014
Last Updated on July 31, 2014
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Saddam RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India
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