MY LAST WORDS...

MY LAST WORDS...

A Poem by Saddam

© 2014 Saddam


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Beautiful words from a heart to his dead girl friend
Nicely penned but I suggest to keep her alive in that heart forever.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

i will my friend and she is...... thank you very much....
Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

you're welcome.
So moving I can't say more

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful write ssad, you write touching romantic pieces you shouldn't change

Posted 10 Years Ago


This one is a touching piece Ssad...very well written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the read! I like that you posted a photo of your penmanship with the piece. It makes it even more personal and touching!

~Stefanie

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is really good, well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brilliant. Just enjoyed!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


First of all, why is your penmanship so perfect? Trade me. Also, very beautiful poem. I loved it. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bittersweet and beautiful. You have touched my heart.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


So beautifully written.... Seriously very heart touching poem...... When you love someone and if that person leaves you then it really hurts a lot and that can be seen through your poem, if perfectly conveys your feelings....... Keep writing..:)


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Saddam

RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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