AN EVENING

At the time of evening

She was at opposite roof of him

And he was other side of road

Eyes were on each other

They were smiling for no reason.

 

Aware with the others, yet…

Hearts blooms when he sends flying kiss

She catches it

Cover her face with same hand.

 

When mislead wind play with her hair

That time her DUPATTA hovering

Making trouble

She tries it to hold properly

He smirked on her blend behavior

Girl snidely got angry

Stumpy turn around

Then he caught his ear with queer face

And she burst into laugh. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Another wonderful write from your pen. You have a good handwriting too...:)..............

[A. Amos]

You made me smile buddy...good job!

[Cory Barrett]

this was fun.................................

[Ruth]

This is cute...I enjoyed the tones here x

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You expressed the situation very well nice poem!

[Gurleen Saluja]

A good write.. A sweet, simple love story sort.. :)

[Namrata]

Typical view of an "Shuddh Desi Romance", must I say. Nice pen down.

[Penny]

Adorable. A true indian romance. I like the feel of it. Very well done.

[Saddam]

Much thanks to you dear.... You know the and You can say it STREET LOVE.

[Penny]

Yes chhajje chhajje ka pyar :-P