AN EVENING

At the time of evening

She was at opposite roof of him

And he was other side of road

Eyes were on each other

They were smiling for no reason.

 

Aware with the others, yet…

Hearts blooms when he sends flying kiss

She catches it

Cover her face with same hand.

 

When mislead wind play with her hair

That time her DUPATTA hovering

Making trouble

She tries it to hold properly

He smirked on her blend behavior

Girl snidely got angry

Stumpy turn around

Then he caught his ear with queer face

And she burst into laugh. 

Reviews

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Awesome write:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Eve Ola]

its beautiful. i enjoyed the read with smiling curve :) Dupatta hovering part is sweet

[Parimal Pratyush]

I had a smile all the way reading this. :) Very desi for me. We experience this scenario so very often.

[Frieda P]

A sweet smile of a poem, enjoyed and giggled and learned a new word too Ssadd. :)

[Stefanie Holmes]

This was a wonderfully penned piece. :) I enjoyed it!

~Stefanie

[audrie]

I enjoyed the way the twist comes about - nice read

[MsJewel]

Lovely my friend :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

This was such a pleasure to read. :)

[MariaDahl1791]

Nice story! I like it. It has been presented and put together pretty well

[Khushi]

A typical story in India, presented so well. Its just so cute!