AN EVENING

At the time of evening

She was at opposite roof of him

And he was other side of road

Eyes were on each other

They were smiling for no reason.

 

Aware with the others, yet…

Hearts blooms when he sends flying kiss

She catches it

Cover her face with same hand.

 

When mislead wind play with her hair

That time her DUPATTA hovering

Making trouble

She tries it to hold properly

He smirked on her blend behavior

Girl snidely got angry

Stumpy turn around

Then he caught his ear with queer face

And she burst into laugh. 

Reviews

[RayXor]

a little tough to catch the grove but once i did the story unfolded good write

[Sindu]

Haha that's cute n simple :)

[Saddam]

thanks buddy.... have a nice day...

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is lovely. My favorite part is blowing the kiss to the girl. Great work!╰☆╮

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is cool. I like the flow of the story, cute but simply romantic.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Well constructed and expressed.

[Anahat]

This was a sweet evening time :)
Simple and nice :)

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Well...Ssad..this one is a sweet poem...it has a touching sense of brewing romance...well written

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So sweet and carefree sweet love
as it should be.



I love your Hand writing very nice :)



I loved these stanza's lines
the most so very cute and sweet.




At the time of evening

She was at opposite roof of him

And he was other side of road

Eyes were on each other

They were smiling for no reason.



Aware with the others, yet…

Hearts blooms when he sends flying kiss

She catches it

Cover her face with same hand.

Thank you for this sweet little piece and thank you
for your kind review and comment you left on my page.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Mila]

Really nice! :)

[ThatWriterGirl]

This is very cute. I love it.