RIDE FOR A GHOST LAND

RIDE FOR A GHOST LAND

 

Unfortunately one day, with my thought second

I made a trip for ghost land.

 

The worst place in the world for living

But I want to feel that wind for short moving.

 

I put on bags in my red vehicle

And start it for ride four hundred miles.

 

That was a dull place surrounded with west leafs

It seems the vampires lived here in a grand relief.

 

I am liberalise by thought and brave by heart

And I entered with the appetite great

Into the door having no escort;

 

There was semi gloom and unkempt skull

Many unknown insects were flying and crawling

Hard was taking breath or made exult.

Some dribbles water fell on me

And a purr appeared from some where

I sensed a shadow with sharpen cannon behind me

I feel sweats on forehead and I was null.

 

With my throbbing heart and unwinked eyes

I turned, someone firmly clutched my neck

I shut down my coming out eyes

And a gaped mouth without any sound.

 

I feel lack of air in my lungs

Without any control I start to whereat the shadow

I opened my eyes and saw�"

My fan was slowly moving with sound queer

Same time wall clock bang 2 am.

Reviews

[Mary Steffen]

Well it is a little bit different than what I am used to of reading of poetry. I didn't know that you can submit a paper on this sight. It's very creative and I like the writing of the poem. You write with good feeling and keep
up the work. It is very nice but a little scary.

[Saddam]

Very thanks to you dear friend....

[Matching Socks]

Loved it! All of it! And such a unique way of showing us.
I feel more connected to the writer with this personal touch.
Wonderful, simply wonderful. :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Interesting poem. I could interpret many things from this

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[Sami Khalil]

You write good even in italics. Bravo............

[vaishnavi]

handwriting is quiet good
which was the place where u meet the ghosts? if they will meet you again say a hi to them from me :D

[Namrata]

intense insight, I must say and a nice way of presenting, luckily your nice handwriting didn't trouble me.
Coming to the verse, it tells us you have a dark and deep corner in your mind you yet haven't explored. How many of us have, though? But it sounds strange when you say you were almost dead there. If you really explore a part of you, you get a new start, new life.