RIDE FOR A GHOST LAND

RIDE FOR A GHOST LAND

 

Unfortunately one day, with my thought second

I made a trip for ghost land.

 

The worst place in the world for living

But I want to feel that wind for short moving.

 

I put on bags in my red vehicle

And start it for ride four hundred miles.

 

That was a dull place surrounded with west leafs

It seems the vampires lived here in a grand relief.

 

I am liberalise by thought and brave by heart

And I entered with the appetite great

Into the door having no escort;

 

There was semi gloom and unkempt skull

Many unknown insects were flying and crawling

Hard was taking breath or made exult.

Some dribbles water fell on me

And a purr appeared from some where

I sensed a shadow with sharpen cannon behind me

I feel sweats on forehead and I was null.

 

With my throbbing heart and unwinked eyes

I turned, someone firmly clutched my neck

I shut down my coming out eyes

And a gaped mouth without any sound.

 

I feel lack of air in my lungs

Without any control I start to whereat the shadow

I opened my eyes and saw�"

My fan was slowly moving with sound queer

Same time wall clock bang 2 am.

Reviews

[Mary Steffen]

Well it is a little bit different than what I am used to of reading of poetry. I didn't know that you can submit a paper on this sight. It's very creative and I like the writing of the poem. You write with good feeling and keep
up the work. It is very nice but a little scary.

[Saddam]

Very thanks to you dear friend....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

a dark, creepy creature of a nightmare or a scary scene in one during a fitful night.
Different and creative.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend...

[Life Pal]

You are welcome ......... :)

[Eve Ola]

wonderful write by creative mind. I enjoyed

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[MariaDahl1791]

Quite interesting, doesn't appear to much as a dream

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

It doesn't appear as a mere dream...I think I should be using the word nightmare.
I liked the imagery....I mean its scary....but its something which is inside us...these dark and creepy corners of the heart never vanish...like that dream after we wake up...guess we have to live with it...

[Saddam]

Very thanks to you dear friend....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awesome pen Ssaad .You always write with so much feeling :)

[Saddam]

Very thanks to you dear friend....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome Ssaad :)

[Kamari's]

Wonderful writing as always I loved it.

[Saddam]

Very thanks to you dear friend....

[Life Pal]

Nice and scary poem, i like it

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...