HIDDEN LOVE

The rhyming of the chimes

Through the temple tho the heart

It is acting as unification

My whole world, my whole thought

 

Your hand for éclat but eyes on me

Lips praying but brow dance

You are in mixed emotion over my dare

But different story with your hair surged

 

Scolding me with pleasant heart

But concern with surround

I'm behind your a flare tippet

You are escaping but had not mind

 

That's the beauty of hidden love

No sin, no secret nor is punished

Author's Note

This is very common in INDIA to play your girl when she come for pray. This is only place that girl's parent have no issue with this, and boy also. But difficult face when both families came around then their love make a hidden sines...

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

These words, the heart behind them, are deep and beautiful, leaving such a feeling of longing to rise above the hidden places to open love. xo

[Kasey Miriam]

Constructed wonderfully! beautiful poem. wonderful job keep up the beautiful work

[AYVID N]

Ssadd...this poem is as beautiful as a prayer. You have pictured the scene so amazingly. A true blue romantic poetry. I loved it.

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very beautifull writen. your words make nice prayer together. i love it .

[BlackRose]

Well done. Beautifully described and superb use of words. Love so true, hearts will never be broken.

[Akansha]

it's so relatable...very nicely written!!!

[vaishnavi]

i could understand that....

[laalaxox]

Loved the way you constructed this poem! Nicely done!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear... I mean heartily..

[Shaquana Adams]

Nicely penned and bittersweet. Love your words ^-^
-QuanaWana

[kublakhan27]

A most precarious predicament...you taught me something with your words that I had not known before, which is what a great poem does...well done :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much sir.....