KUCH SOCH RAHI THI WO

KUCH SOCH RAHI THI WO

 

Akele

Ped ki chaon tale

Baithi thi wah

Kuch soch rahi thi wah

Jane kis khyal mein khoi thi wah?

Kuch soch rahi thi wah.

Ujale - Ujaale

Surya ke tapt the phaile

Kyon ruthi thi wah?

Hokar bhi nahi thi wah

Jane kis khyal mein khoi thi wah?

Kuch soch rahi thi wah.

Kant kach kale

Hawa ke sang athkeliyan si khele

Par khamoosh thi wah

Hasiye par khadi thi wah

Jane kis khyal mein khoi thi wah?

Kuch soch rahi thi wah.

Surya ne jaal samete

Sanjh bhi to phir ho chale

Chalne ko mudi thi wah

Aankho mein kuch khwab the bhayawah

Jane kis khyal mein khoi thi wah?

Kuch soch rahi thi wah.

Subah hum nikale

Usi raste Kautuhalwash hi chale

Wahi ped ki chaon tale

Nirjan-Akele

Baithi thi wah

Anjan kisi khyal mein dubi thi wah

Jane kis khyal mein khoi thi wah?

Kuch soch rahi thi wah.

SADDAM HUSEN

Reviews

[vaishnavi]

so at last u have translated it to hindi............
by the way it is nice with a good shayari and a effect but again the same mistake wah instead of woh
and the words are not very easy to understand because spellings are not right so it took me some time to read and comment but i should say it is a fab poem i like it :)

[Khushi]

Kya likha hai yaar!! good to read a hindi poem written by you! Sahi hai!!

[Penny]

Solitary reaper ki yaad dila di. Haan, jaisa ki utkarsh ne kaha spelling mistake hai par khayalon mein koi khami nahin hai. Bahot khoob.

[saksham]

Bohat sunder Kavita hai sir.. . Bohat umdaa

[saksham]

Bohat sunder Kavita hai sir.. . Bohat umdaa

[saksham]

Bohat sunder Kavita hai sir.. . Bohat umdaa

[Kamari's]

Darling... I love your writing but I can only read english .... but I do love and respect your writing.

[Utkarsh Singh]

yaar poem to bhut bariya hai ...........sachhi dil tak chali gayi .......bs ek doubt hai

KUCH SOCH RAHI THI WO

tumne WO use Kiya hui ya WAH ???

[TheKratiMittal]

I'm not much into Hindi poems but this seems like a nice attempt!

[vaishnavi]

what is this written??????
just typed the keys anyhow :P

[Saddam]

I watch this. It is in hindi font. It is not appeared correctally. I am going to transfer it in english form.

[vaishnavi]

oh i thought u just typed anyhow
by the way the title is KUCH SOCH RAHI THI WAH so it should be woh than wah

[Saddam]

oh yes..... Thank you dear. I placed your word soon. Thank you again for look.

[vaishnavi]

your welcome :D