A CONFESSION

THIS IS A CONFESSION OF A LOVE BETWEEN TWO GIRLS

OF COURSE I AM IN LOVE

THOUGH CONFUSION IS THERE FOR NOW

IT IS YOU OR YOUR FRIEND

I BADLY THINK ABOUT IT TILL THE DAY END

I LOVE YOU BUT CAN'T SHUNS HER TOO

SHE IS MY BREATH THOUGH HEART BEAT IS YOU

ABOUT EVERY DAY I FEEL A NAIL POIGNANT

I DON'T KNOW WHETHER IT IS RIGHT OR PORTENT

I LIKE YOUR SMILE, YOUR FRIEND'S EYES

THAT YOUR CATCHY BEAUTY MY HEART IS FLIES

I KNOW, IT IS OVER PERSUADE BUT LUCID

DON'T WANT BREAK YOUR FAITH WHICH YOU BUILD

I LEFT MY DECISION FOR YOU, BOTH 

IT IS MY VOICE AND IT IS THE TRUTH.

Reviews

[Sonam]

short and sweet sonnet....you have written it in a way that it expressed everything you wanted to say...

however, your situation seems funny to me. sorry if it hurts you but dear its definitely not love. you are attracted to both of them....nice confession although ;)

[Saddam]

that's why he is confessing...... If you will read my other poetry you can understand. I believe only true love which is beyond the words, you can say....Aankho ki bhasa....

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

This reminds me of Archie and his love for Betty and Veronica. From where I come from, it is okay to love more than one. For men, of course. Hehe.

Allow time to guide your heart.

[Saddam]

I DO BUT THERE IS NONE...... THANKS DEAR FRIEND....

[Khushi]

there is none??

[Saddam]

yea..... an alone soul.....

[Khushi]

u r not alone pls. u will get a really gud girl.

[Saddam]

Ok.....lets see..... I am still here with your words.... my sweet friend.

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

No worries. There are billions of single girls out there. And then there's Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. With a world like this SSADD's not gonna be a lone soul for long :P

[Utkarsh Singh]

you fell for two at a time .......? do one thing toss a coin .heads = 1st one, tails =2nd .......:D
jokes apart ...
i liked the confession you made through your poem .....nice one buddy

[Saddam]

THANK YOU DEAR FRIEND....

[Cory Barrett]

Slippery slope. We only have one being to give, and if it is divided no one gets all of us.

[Saddam]

THANKS DEAR FRIEND,....

[A. Amos]

Falling for two at one time, and when they are best friends...hmmm interesting!

Enjoyed the read

being honest about how one feels is rare and most people really don't want the truth; they simply want to be agreed with, validated.... and in the quite of night we run the truth through our hearts and minds without speaking it. You just have... nice job

[Rishabh Arora]

A Song... well anyone could sing this out :D I liked this :)

[Ruth]

Love is love, to be cherished with whatever sex, I liked this x

[Vidya Bacchus]

A very interesting poem Ssaad with an important message,We should be free to love who we want without being judged :)