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A POEM WITH DEAR FRIEND RACHELLE......ANOTHER COLLAB

Let me meet you
In Life's sorrows and joys
all my nights and days

With you - in every cheer and strife

to live Life with you
as my rising sun and dazzling moon

You and I alone filling the void
sharing one another's vision

 

Head on your shoulder
  Palm in your hand
 I share my dreams

no feasible fear for being departure                 
upper from all earthly uncouth bonds 
let snatched all foes and ends wreck.

Reviews

[audrie]

no feasible fear for being departure
upper from all earthly uncouth bonds
let snatched all foes and ends wreck.

great metaphor - it's endearing

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Well done on your Collaboration, Sadd...Congrats to both of you!...
The blending of two minds form a well depicted bond, "through thick and thin"....
Nice!~xoxo~:)

[Hibiki]

"Head on your shoulder
Palm in your hand"
Like it~

[Kasey Miriam]

wonderful job to you both! This poem is beautiful and sweet and very well written. I enjoy is as i enjoy the rest of your work and i see you grow in each of your writes.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww Ssaad this is truly lovely.You are a hopeless romantic for sure :)

[MsJewel]

Absolutely beautiful my sweet, romantic friend

:) Julie

[Khushi]

A lovely poem.. so full of emotion, and like all your poems so beautiful! Whom is it dedicated to?? Very well written.

[Sami Khalil]

"You and I alone filling the void
sharing one another's vision

Head on your shoulder
Palm in your hand
I share my dreams"

[EmilyBianca]

I like this one a lot. The tittle confuses me a bit, but it is a beautiful poem.

[Pinkyleeamy]

It's such a romantic poem. I can see it as someone's wedding vows. Really nice.