POISING MOMENTS

Squalls is calling your desires

Dribbles of rain is bringing your fires.

Beclouded sky playing with moon

Fraudulence cloud took various role as protean.

Your odors in, grievancing me like canine

The embers of lunar, though, is shine.

Cascade and its tumultous colourless water

appears as your adjunction at its layer.

But i'm searching at all this environment

Why are you all poising,me, at my moment

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

This reads very well. I like the style with rhyming couplets. The 'english' is not quite right in places, but I guess that in India it would be correct. The English language has many variations! Loved the poem, short, precise conjuring up a lovely image.

[Ruth]

Why aren't we all out there...probing and trying to understand the understandable :) Made me think x

[lissalovesyou]

Wow, filled with meaning. I will be taking a while to fully examine and understand this poem
lissalovesyou:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short yet full of description and stern meaning, well done, good read.

[emmajoy]

Your work really grows, you're using words as your friends from another land and I so admire that! Love the phrase, 'Cascade and its tumultous colourless water ~ appears as your adjunction at its layer.' Bearing in mind you write in an unfamiliar language, you display your thoughts gently and as clearly as can be.

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful write you put a lot into a rather small poem

[star73]

lovely very good thanks for sure

[maria ( rose)]

Cascade and its tumultous colourless water..wow!,,You always amaze me with your great talents and vivid imagination..Great Share!!!:))
maria rose♥

[Sami Khalil]

"The embers of lunar, though, is shine.

Cascade and its tumultous colourless water"

Some good and powerful imagery in this poem. Bravio, sir...:)..............

[DIVYA]

Great poem Ssadd. Full of meaning. Keep penning your moods and thoughts.