Balm for Your Soul

Balm for Your Soul 

ssadd collaborate with penny

 

Every feeling is real 
It is new but effectively true 
Now track my every wreck 
This vital virtue could not control by any rescue.

Feel my ultimate jealousy
for your standing by others end 
whether he is your friend 
I just want a walk, hand in hand with you.


You are irrestrictive elusive
you are not here yet luring
Fast stimulation for your curing 
Violent-nascent, hollow-shadow, hard to spend moments few.

Reviews

[Ruth]

A double edged thread here - potent and makes one think on the shadows that follow our wants - even at times when we know they can't be x

[star73]

Nice love reading it very good

[Kasey Miriam]

this is a very enjoyable poem

[Shezza]

Raw...I liked its imperfections.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is an awesome collaboration!

[Kamari's]

Very realistic on how people want that someone to themselves yet they seem not to notice well done

[Stefanie Holmes]

This is awesome! I truly enjoyed reading this piece... made me smile. :)

~Stefanie

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[lissalovesyou]

This is beautiful...I love the last stanza.
Please keep up the collaborations and the great work!
lissalovesyou:)

[MsJewel]

Wonderful collaboration and a great poem. Good work!
:) Julie