Balm for Your Soul

Balm for Your Soul 

ssadd collaborate with penny

 

Every feeling is real 
It is new but effectively true 
Now track my every wreck 
This vital virtue could not control by any rescue.

Feel my ultimate jealousy
for your standing by others end 
whether he is your friend 
I just want a walk, hand in hand with you.


You are irrestrictive elusive
you are not here yet luring
Fast stimulation for your curing 
Violent-nascent, hollow-shadow, hard to spend moments few.

Reviews

[fadingtale]

Such a strong emotional poem! Thank you for submitting for the all about love contest!

[Twizzler]

Well done! Such strong emotion in this piece!

[xDalliance]

Wow, this poem was so strong! Loved it, Saddam :)

[EmilyBianca]

This poem reminds me of how i feel about someone. Nicely written.

[Rachelle]

Nice collaboration, SSAADD and Penny!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You two wrote this very well Ssaad and Penny :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Nicely written! Great job with this collaboration ^-^ Your poems seem to be getting deeper and better!
-QuanaWana

[kitty cat]

lovely done, love it,grat job

[Khushi]

jealousy is such a wierd emotion! Your poems get better n better n even better! So whom is dis dedicated to?