RAVEN NECTAR

RAVEN NECTAR

A Chapter by Saddam

RAVEN NECTAR

--SADDAM HUSEN

 

Now, when new whimsy yest to own nock

And dancing glimpse stars strive vastly

Then new wrench checking gist to own nature

Ebb body yell loudly, your raven nectar retrench him.

 

He, ecstatic capture eau, you unsealable

Ideate estate, eddies silently, yond drawing gust.

 

šË

 

 

©2014 SADDAM HUSEN



© 2014 Saddam


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Very nice interesting piece

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear friend.
Very interesting word choice with this one. Bravo!

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
Another exceptional well written piece. thanks for sharing:))xx

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Appreciate your words dear. Glad you like my work. Thank you so much.
Great read hun, enjoyed :) x

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
Took a minute to get where you were going with this one, your use of certain words is unique, made it all the more interesting, the title drew me in, love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend. Love your art too.
This is excellently written Ssadd .I really enjoyed reading it :)

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank yo very much dear friend.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
I love this, very beautiful. Good job.

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
I enoyed this one. when reading it it had an upbeat rythem.

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Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear. I am much glad to hear you.

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