RAVEN NECTAR

RAVEN NECTAR

--SADDAM HUSEN

 

Now, when new whimsy yest to own nock

And dancing glimpse stars strive vastly

Then new wrench checking gist to own nature

Ebb body yell loudly, your raven nectar retrench him.

 

He, ecstatic capture eau, you unsealable

Ideate estate, eddies silently, yond drawing gust.

 

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©2014 SADDAM HUSEN

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Intruding and interesting piece.



Loved these stanza's lines here.


Now, when new whimsy yest to own nock

And dancing glimpse stars strive vastly




whimsy yest to own nock


Did you mean Yeast ??

Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Kindred poet

[star73]

nice job thanks for sharing:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I love this, awesome write.

Kaze~ :-)

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

[Julie Spade]

Overbearing original , intellectual, and interesting! I , too , had to search some words up because of the word choice which is NOT a bad thing to make your audience to do. I applaud your ever-growing process of becoming a grand writer.

[EmilyBianca]

You quote Saddam Husen a lot. Why is that?

[00000000000000000000000..]

Your wording is far out in a lot of your reads but I loved it:)

[Arabella Song]

I was somewhat confused during, well, all of this XD And, to be completely honest, had to look up some words to even get what it was saying XD That's not a bad thing though at all. There was something very intriguing about this piece :) Good job!

[Blood Ink Diary]

Surely this verse has a certain intrigue and captures attention, all at once !
This poem was different from your other poems I have thus-far read, you have a versatile streak in writing ! Cheers