RAVEN NECTAR

RAVEN NECTAR

A Chapter by Saddam

RAVEN NECTAR

--SADDAM HUSEN

 

Now, when new whimsy yest to own nock

And dancing glimpse stars strive vastly

Then new wrench checking gist to own nature

Ebb body yell loudly, your raven nectar retrench him.

 

He, ecstatic capture eau, you unsealable

Ideate estate, eddies silently, yond drawing gust.

 

šË

 

 

©2014 SADDAM HUSEN



© 2014 Saddam


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Intruding and interesting piece.



Loved these stanza's lines here.


Now, when new whimsy yest to own nock

And dancing glimpse stars strive vastly




whimsy yest to own nock


Did you mean Yeast ??

Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice job thanks for sharing:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this, awesome write.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Overbearing original , intellectual, and interesting! I , too , had to search some words up because of the word choice which is NOT a bad thing to make your audience to do. I applaud your ever-growing process of becoming a grand writer.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You quote Saddam Husen a lot. Why is that?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your wording is far out in a lot of your reads but I loved it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I was somewhat confused during, well, all of this XD And, to be completely honest, had to look up some words to even get what it was saying XD That's not a bad thing though at all. There was something very intriguing about this piece :) Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Surely this verse has a certain intrigue and captures attention, all at once !
This poem was different from your other poems I have thus-far read, you have a versatile streak in writing ! Cheers

Posted 10 Years Ago



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