FROG PRINCE

FROG PRINCE

 

Only princess of the palace

She was darling for everyone

One day, princess missed her golden ball,

During play, in near pond.

 

Sorrowful princess sat there for a while

Suddenly a frog appeared from somewhere

Glimmered frog croaked in human voice

He made a deal with princess for finding the ball.

 

The deal was amazing but she made promise

Frog wanted to spend a day peered as prince.

 

One night frog appeared at palace

Reminding princess, ask for his reward

King looked so state and ordered

To bear her promises what she had made.

 

Frog sipped and supper in golden-silver

And croaked for her silken pillow

Angry princess threw ugly frog out of window

Suddenly a flood of light appear�"

 

There was beautiful prince out there

Melted princess got married and live happily forever.

Reviews

[Arabella Song]

I really liked the idea and most of the presentation here, but I had trouble reading past some of the odd grammar. Usually I can ignore than in a poem, but it really threw me off here. I think you did it purposefully and I loved EVERYTHING else about the poem, but the lack of words such as "to" and using a present tense verb at the end of a past tense sentence really made it a bit weird for me to read.

But, overall, good job :) An interesting view on an old tale :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. I will keep it mind always and as soon as fix that problem. Glad your review. Thanks to you dear.

[Khushi]

I like the story. But i dont think dat the princess deserves the prince..

[Saddam]

Appreciate your words dear but that is not my story, it is a tell from Grims Brothers. So sorry for your disappointment.

[Khushi]

thats really honest of you.

[maria ( rose)]

SSADD I enjoyed this very much the story telling flowed with anticipation and the Melted princess got married and live happily forever.awesome read, thanks for sharing.
maria rose

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. Always happy moment to read you.

[maria ( rose)]

aww you are too special♥ you always make me smile:)

[Tina Louise UK]

Wonderfully done hun, enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear.

[s y e]

SSADD, this is a great version of an old tale, I loved it.

[Saddam]

Appreciate your words dear. Thank you so much.

[Kasey Miriam]

A fantastic version of the old tale. very good flow in this poem

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear,

[A. Amos]

I really like the flow of this poetry and your story telling is simply spectacular!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for your splendid feedback. Appreciating your words.