FROG PRINCE

FROG PRINCE

 

Only princess of the palace

She was darling for everyone

One day, princess missed her golden ball,

During play, in near pond.

 

Sorrowful princess sat there for a while

Suddenly a frog appeared from somewhere

Glimmered frog croaked in human voice

He made a deal with princess for finding the ball.

 

The deal was amazing but she made promise

Frog wanted to spend a day peered as prince.

 

One night frog appeared at palace

Reminding princess, ask for his reward

King looked so state and ordered

To bear her promises what she had made.

 

Frog sipped and supper in golden-silver

And croaked for her silken pillow

Angry princess threw ugly frog out of window

Suddenly a flood of light appear�"

 

There was beautiful prince out there

Melted princess got married and live happily forever.

Reviews

[Arabella Song]

I really liked the idea and most of the presentation here, but I had trouble reading past some of the odd grammar. Usually I can ignore than in a poem, but it really threw me off here. I think you did it purposefully and I loved EVERYTHING else about the poem, but the lack of words such as "to" and using a present tense verb at the end of a past tense sentence really made it a bit weird for me to read.

But, overall, good job :) An interesting view on an old tale :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. I will keep it mind always and as soon as fix that problem. Glad your review. Thanks to you dear.

[star73]

I like it a lot i love fairy tales they have such meaning! You do a great job:) on your writing

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing, simply amazing. Brilliantly written. :-)

Kaze~

[Mary Steffen]

Very creative and it took me back to fairy tales of long ago. I like it a lot. Writing is well done and keep up with your work.

[Julie Spade]

I enjoyed the stories' flow and words. So happy to have found this

[EmilyBianca]

Nice job on this one, I like it better than the original.

[Saddam]

Your words are bonus for me. Glad you like this.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Awesome story:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your very welcome:))))))))))))

[Ahena MK]

Wonderfully crafted... Liked the way you delivered the story through light rhymes ... Thanks for the lovely read
Ahena :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Jewel Chanda]

what's the opinion of my other poet friends in this regard??

[Saddam]

I haven't its answer too, I can not change that story too. It is only my craft but story is from Grims Brother. It is fairy tales, so many dissatisfaction may come. But appreciate your words dear.

[Jewel Chanda]

its like an old wine in a new bottle .. served with excellence... its true that keeping promise is always rewarding in one way or other.. but SAAD I have a question.. If the angry princess thrown away and rejected the ugly frog, then why she shall be allowed to rip the fruit when the ugly frog turns into an handsome prince..? ...:) waiting to hear form you friend..