FRAME OF ELYSIUM

FRAME OF ELYSIUM

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

This is my dream or what happened! 
My bereaved love is here,
Coupling my memories and embracing me tightly.

These zephyrs are very selfish 
Till now, this was bruises my skin 
A threnody was floating 
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.

The remnant pieces of romance-
Walked back into frame of Elysium
It alluring, whimming me to be rejuvenate.

Author's Note

THIS IS MY MEMORY

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

These zephyrs are very selfish
Till now, this was bruises my skin
A threnody was floating
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.

The remnant pieces of romance-

what a narration. very good work dear :) loved it :)
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[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Latifa]

The remnant pieces of romance-
Walked back into frame of Elysium
It alluring, whimming me to be rejuvenate.
lovely write

[Saddam]

thank you so much dear friend for your lovely feedback.

[Shaquana Adams]

Bittersweet but lovely. Nice one :)

[Saddam]

Wow. Thank you very much friend.

[Jewel Chanda]

superb.. just loved it..:)

[Saddam]

Big thanks for your awesome compliment.

[Jewel Chanda]

welcome friend:

[Sami Khalil]

I hope your aches and bruises will go away...Bravo...................

[Saddam]

Well sir, my aches is on but not for anything else it is my passion for writing. Thank you very much,

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Husein...:)...........................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow my friend Ssaad this is wow! .I love it .Memories yes ?

[Saddam]

You are so kind dear. Thank you very much. I am muchly happy with these words. Dil nach raha hai.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my dear friend :)

[Frieda P]

This is very lovely Ssadd...a memory to be sipped in bittersweet reminisces.

'this was bruises my skin'...I think you meant 'this one' or 'was bruising'

[Saddam]

You are so sweet as your poetry. Thank you very much. Whenever I'll be at computer I fix that words.

[Tina Louise UK]

Bittersweet memories, beautiful hun :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.