FRAME OF ELYSIUM

FRAME OF ELYSIUM

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

This is my dream or what happened! 
My bereaved love is here,
Coupling my memories and embracing me tightly.

These zephyrs are very selfish 
Till now, this was bruises my skin 
A threnody was floating 
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.

The remnant pieces of romance-
Walked back into frame of Elysium
It alluring, whimming me to be rejuvenate.

Author's Note

THIS IS MY MEMORY

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

These zephyrs are very selfish
Till now, this was bruises my skin
A threnody was floating
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.

The remnant pieces of romance-

what a narration. very good work dear :) loved it :)
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[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Namrata]

I love this one. The zephyrs are very selfish...ha ha ha...nice one !

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simply Beautiful.


I loved these stanza's lines.
These zephyrs are very selfish
Till now, this was bruises my skin
A threnody was floating
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.

The remnant pieces of romance-

Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Kindred poet

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Your a very talented writer, SSADD, Nicely written. :-)

Kaze~

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[EmilyBianca]

You have an amazing use of vocabulary, you are such a smart, talented soul!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[EmilyBianca]

anytime hon.

[Ayvid N]

An excellent write from you Ssadd. I especially was bowled over by the selfish zephyrs.

[Saddam]

Thank You dear. It is always pleasure to hear you.

[maria ( rose)]

remarkable to say the least. Thank you again for sharing:)
I enjoyed every read.
maria

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Maria.

[maria ( rose)]

:)) it says not enough characters..here's another :)) for you!!!!

[Julie Spade]

Wow, this poem is pretty sweet! The imagery is amusing and new ! Thanks for thee request :)

[Saddam]

Thank you for your energetic review.

[ANCIENTRUNAWAY]

A threnody was floating
But now amatory is on and entwine my soul.
The remnant pieces of romance-
Walked back into frame of Elysium

My dear, these are excellent words complementing each other with love and passion. I admire your 'Author's note', for it does not need an explanation for it is YOUR vision and NO ONE else's.

Keep Calm and Carry On

[Saddam]

Heartly thanks to you dear. It is great honour to be praised. I am glad you like most.