MY CRAZINESS

MY CRAZINESS  "

 

……….BY SADDAM HUSEN

 

 

Is it my craziness!
You are not here, at eventide
but you are with me, by my side.

 

Darkness is here, dilapidation lights
Coral dawning sun, smiling
and ogling on me, as saying -"Illusion is now over."

 

Lydian and Dalian shy winds
gyrating at me, as susurrus to me
"Feel your girl over here, catchy."

 

Amazingly I can feel her hand over my face
sliding over and again wobbling

Warm blow of her and sweet mist;
but open eyes, there were stars--
Moon with mini transparent clouds.

ã"v"ã

Reviews

Not one of my favorites of yours... but I can understand what you are trying to convey... its like you were in a hurry to get this one out or... the emotion was so big you were struggling a bit... I do see great hope for it to evolve as your other writing has often stirred me...

[AYVID N]

You create a perfect mirage. A great poem from you Ssadd. Hold on to those dreams.

[Saddam]

Big thanks to you dear...

[maria ( rose)]

captivating, your words are so expressive. very nice, once again. thanks for sharing
-maria

[Saddam]

I am very happy dear to hear you. Thank you very much.

[maria ( rose)]

♥you are so welcome :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such beautiful way with word's Lovely. I love it yet sad and beautiful at the same time. Blessings my friend

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for your beautiful words. Totally appreciate.

[Simran Kewlani]

Suggestion- It should be "Is it my craziness?"
The poem is amazing. Poetry flows very gently within you. Love it. (:

[Saddam]

Thank you for your suggestion dear but it is not question, it is surprise. I'm happy that you kept your eyes. Thank you.

[Simran Kewlani]

Oh okay. Sorry. :(

[Saddam]

Don't be. You do your right. Thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ssaad you have quite a way with words my dear.Very nice:)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear...you are very kind.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)