HEDONIST OR DISILLUSION

HEDONIST OR DISILLUSION

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

Slowly and swiftly a drift is running

This rapt is capturing my breathing

Though this maze, raze my veins

Yet I am not trying any rescue.

 

It has intricate me, although

But ephemerally star fluttes in dark

A manner of coyly appeared for me on me

Hedonist or disillusion is this whim.

 

Happy at con adore

Sorrow in con amore

Flowing in still lake urge

Quixotic manner is my curb

The entire amenities are very exquisite.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Quite Beautiful I like it.



Thank you for sharing this Beautiful piece.


Loved these stanza's lines.


Slowly and swiftly a drift is running

This rapt is capturing my breathing

Though this maze, raze my veins

Yet I am not trying any rescue.



Happy at con adore

Sorrow in con amore

Flowing in still lake urge

Quixotic manner is my curb

The entire amenities are very exquisite.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Saddam]

you are too kind dear.... your review always pleasant me.... thank you very much...DHANYAWAD..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. It's my pleasure. Blessings. kindred poet

[Saddam]

DHANYAWAD.. dear friend..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

what does that mean. I am sure it is a pleasant Blessing. :))

[audrie]

I was captivated from the start - very well done

[A. Amos]

Great work my friend, as always truly enjoyed the read...

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Kamari's]

Very well put I would love to read more if you ever decided to put this into a book

[Shaquana Adams]

This is interesting and unique. Nicely penned! :)
-QuanaWana

[AYVID N]

Much enjoyed this piece Ssadd. Very well done keep writing.

[Saddam]

THANKS A LOT DEAR... ALWAYS MAKE ME HAPPY... THANK YOU VERY MUCH...

[Rehan Roy]

I enjoyed your 'maze' style of writing this poem. Wonderful!