HEDONIST OR DISILLUSION

HEDONIST OR DISILLUSION

A Chapter by Saddam

HEDONIST OR DISILLUSION

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

Slowly and swiftly a drift is running

This rapt is capturing my breathing

Though this maze, raze my veins

Yet I am not trying any rescue.

 

It has intricate me, although

But ephemerally star fluttes in dark

A manner of coyly appeared for me on me

Hedonist or disillusion is this whim.

 

Happy at con adore

Sorrow in con amore

Flowing in still lake urge

Quixotic manner is my curb

The entire amenities are very exquisite.



© 2014 Saddam


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Quite Beautiful I like it.



Thank you for sharing this Beautiful piece.


Loved these stanza's lines.


Slowly and swiftly a drift is running

This rapt is capturing my breathing

Though this maze, raze my veins

Yet I am not trying any rescue.



Happy at con adore

Sorrow in con amore

Flowing in still lake urge

Quixotic manner is my curb

The entire amenities are very exquisite.



Blessings. kindred poet


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. It's my pleasure. Blessings. kindred poet
Saddam

10 Years Ago

DHANYAWAD.. dear friend..
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

what does that mean. I am sure it is a pleasant Blessing. :))



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Very exquisite... Loved it and how all the words blended to great such moving lines.. I applaud you and your ability as a writer..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such beautifully written. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It seems more like you have unnecessarily used words that could have otherwise been avoided.
The theme is however, fresh and appealing.
All-in-all a good read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done your poems contiue to get better

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such an amazing poem. It had such a great flow to it. I loved every moment of it. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful my friend. Your poetry keeps getting better and better!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a well written poem. Its great to see how your poetry just keeps on going from strength to strength SSADD :) Penny

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice rhythm and rhymes
I'm not much of poetry reader/writer, but I thought it was okay.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem with a beautiful flow.
I love the last stanza.
Great job!
lissalovesyou:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I was captivated from the start - very well done


Posted 10 Years Ago



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