LOVE - LUST - LOSS

LOVE-LUST-LOSS

-SADDAM HUSEN

LOVE

So lonely

So broken I was

But one thing now I have

One feeling at my deep heart

Your images of innocence

Your love.

 

LUST

Cute covet

In intoxicate

Wanna feel your heart

Happy to be deviate with your name

I am try for your snuggle

That’s your lust.

 

LOSS

So lonely

So broken I am

No feelings, no willing

Gyrated warm moments now witting

How alone and burning

Every things has lost.

Reviews

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You explained all very well but I am the loss one in my life at the moment.

[Saddam]

Great thanks to you my friend.

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Your very welcome

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I think you're trying to make new things here...like finding a different style. Glad to see someone innovating himself.

It's a nice piece and I enjoyed reading with the combination of 3 L's. =)

[Saddam]

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad to hear you.

[Sami Khalil]

"But one thing now I have

One feeling at my deep heart

Your images of innocence

Your love."

Beautiful...:).............................

[Saddam]

Glad you like it. Thank you very much dear.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................................

[EmilyBianca]

You have an excellent vocabulary. It perfects to poem and makes it sound very sophisticated. Love it!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. You are too kind.

[EmilyBianca]

I only speak the truth Hon.

[Latifa]

nicely crafted poetry here Ssadd

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

[maria ( rose)]

you clarify this well bringing a greater understanding to everyday relationships. Thank you for sharing and for your friendship. looking forward to reading more of your work. :)
maria

[costa siwale]

Excellent, nice flow of words, nice rhythm Ssadd

[Vidya Bacchus]

Relationships consist of all these things my friend :)

[Frieda P]

A bittersweet read Ssadd, you gave us a glimpse into various stages of a relationship. Nicely pen'd.

Last line ...'everything has been lost' perhaps.

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully somber...enjoyed my friend :) x