LOVE - LUST - LOSS

LOVE-LUST-LOSS

-SADDAM HUSEN

LOVE

So lonely

So broken I was

But one thing now I have

One feeling at my deep heart

Your images of innocence

Your love.

 

LUST

Cute covet

In intoxicate

Wanna feel your heart

Happy to be deviate with your name

I am try for your snuggle

That’s your lust.

 

LOSS

So lonely

So broken I am

No feelings, no willing

Gyrated warm moments now witting

How alone and burning

Every things has lost.

Reviews

[Sonam]

Love-Lust-Loss...interesting topic...and interesting content too...thr is a nice flow of words in ur poem...I like it :)

[Kristine Ferg]

Very intimate. I enjoy how the words themselves flow so well into an unfolding story of beautiful imagery. Really enjoyed this poetry I like your style. I thank you very much for your review!

[audrie]

sounds like the immediate aftermath of a relationship. . . why does it leave us feeling so empty. sad poem - thanks for sharing

[i0am0ghost]

there is a good flow to this, i like it,

the love segment was very flowy and whispy and then you chopped it up with the lust. nice.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Appreciate your words.

[gabrielle]

Ah, the three big "L" in a relationship that we all go through. You penned it so well, my friend.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Appreciate your words.

[BlackRose]

Clever great write you penned err typed here of such emotions. Your piece shining through wonderfully.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[BlackRose]

Your welcome sweetie.

[Trace]

Interesting thoughts here
skillful expression of feelings and emotions.

Trace

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[MsJewel]

Very creative and clever. Your talent shines in this wonderful little gem!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

muchly appreciate your words dear. Here you put petrograph on paper,

[Jewel Chanda]

excellently written... every one of us encounter those feelings..I liked it..

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Muchly appreciate your words.

[VelvetRosetta]

Oh those warm moments...never easy, I know all to well the feeling of being broken...nicely done!

[Saddam]

Thanks for being attached. Thank you so much.