FOUR STRANGE WORD

FOUR STRANGE WORDS

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

LOVE the words of four

It is world, beyond and more

Dream land and great far

This is VINASH, and every moment BAHAR.

 

 

L= Lagao till the last breath

O= Cactus sometimes and some SAGE of flower

V= Verse of heart to the heart

E= Enbuild in your nerve as blood.

 

When love vis-à-vis love

One tries to a’bas another by con amore

Gingerly you reach at Elysium

With your love which you adore.

 

Four words whirls you all four stage of universe,

Though it is very clear-simple yet big intricate.

 

I have used some HINDI words

Vinash= destroy

Bahar= spring, happiness

Lagao= attachment

Sege= bed

Some Latin and French words

Vis-a "vis= face to face

A’bas= getting down

Con amore= by love

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Very original and stunning read Ssadd, thanks for the translation, my favorite of yours thus far, nicely pen'd my friend!

[Ahena MK]

wonderfully written.... liked the way you added hindi in it... makes the poem special also nice title :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Really nice Ssaad. You are a very good writer :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully done, really enjoyed this one hun :) x

[Sami Khalil]

I like this unique write. Thank you for the translations too...:)...............

[Saddam]

Glad you like my experiment. Thank you very much sir.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................