FOUR STRANGE WORD

FOUR STRANGE WORDS

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

LOVE the words of four

It is world, beyond and more

Dream land and great far

This is VINASH, and every moment BAHAR.

 

 

L= Lagao till the last breath

O= Cactus sometimes and some SAGE of flower

V= Verse of heart to the heart

E= Enbuild in your nerve as blood.

 

When love vis-à-vis love

One tries to a’bas another by con amore

Gingerly you reach at Elysium

With your love which you adore.

 

Four words whirls you all four stage of universe,

Though it is very clear-simple yet big intricate.

 

I have used some HINDI words

Vinash= destroy

Bahar= spring, happiness

Lagao= attachment

Sege= bed

Some Latin and French words

Vis-a "vis= face to face

A’bas= getting down

Con amore= by love

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful. Expressed very elegantly.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

very well explained nice poem!

[Saddam]

Thank to you dear for stopping by... have a nice day!!!

[maria ( rose)]

This is outright phenomenal. Like the style, very creative, original. :) Con amore, until next time,,,,
-maria rose

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......:";`

[M.K. Jawdat]

Creative piece. Very good

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......:";`

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this clever and well written poem.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......:";`

[NeiL ArandA]

Trying to describe these 4 letter words that could bring death and life to someone depending on which side you're in. Render, Recipient or Unreciprocated . A double edge sword.. Nice portrayal SSADD

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......:";`

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Awesome write.

Kaze~ :-D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......:";`

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[AYVID N]

Very thoroughly enjoyed Ssadd. I loved the usage of Hndi. It's a great read.

[PurpleQuartz]

Unique and really wonderful!!!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Different, But beautifully done. Blessings. Kindred poet