FOUR STRANGE WORD

FOUR STRANGE WORD

A Poem by Saddam

FOUR STRANGE WORDS

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

LOVE the words of four

It is world, beyond and more

Dream land and great far

This is VINASH, and every moment BAHAR.

 

 

L= Lagao till the last breath

O= Cactus sometimes and some SAGE of flower

V= Verse of heart to the heart

E= Enbuild in your nerve as blood.

 

When love vis-à-vis love

One tries to a’bas another by con amore

Gingerly you reach at Elysium

With your love which you adore.

 

Four words whirls you all four stage of universe,

Though it is very clear-simple yet big intricate.

 

I have used some HINDI words

Vinash= destroy

Bahar= spring, happiness

Lagao= attachment

Sege= bed

Some Latin and French words

Vis-a "vis= face to face

A’bas= getting down

Con amore= by love

© 2014 Saddam


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Nice attempt. Keep writing :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like how you have incorporated Hindi words into this. It really makes for a different and interesting poem. Nicely done :) Penny

Posted 10 Years Ago


wonderful. . .I will never look at the word love the same

Posted 10 Years Ago


a lovely poem. beautiful usage of hindi words in an english poem. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ya, I guess love is fine.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I need more intellect to read this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a mix of words and languages

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your mix of languages, metaphors and poetic devices have produced a truly striking work...I came away from this piece feeling like I learned things I never knew before...great work my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


very good combination of words n metaphors . Welldone

Posted 10 Years Ago



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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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