FOUR STRANGE WORD

FOUR STRANGE WORDS

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

LOVE the words of four

It is world, beyond and more

Dream land and great far

This is VINASH, and every moment BAHAR.

 

 

L= Lagao till the last breath

O= Cactus sometimes and some SAGE of flower

V= Verse of heart to the heart

E= Enbuild in your nerve as blood.

 

When love vis-à-vis love

One tries to a’bas another by con amore

Gingerly you reach at Elysium

With your love which you adore.

 

Four words whirls you all four stage of universe,

Though it is very clear-simple yet big intricate.

 

I have used some HINDI words

Vinash= destroy

Bahar= spring, happiness

Lagao= attachment

Sege= bed

Some Latin and French words

Vis-a "vis= face to face

A’bas= getting down

Con amore= by love

Reviews

[Darkened_drear]

Your description of love is quite lovely and the fact you use an interesting yet differing choice of words shows you are a poet with character :) I loved it

[zunie frost]

you describe love very beautifully !!
great job

[Jamestown]

This is fantastic, I truly enjoyed reading this, so creative, well thought out and executed,
not to mention the writing is fabulous and the different languages used, bravo!!!!
Thanks for sharing, and b-blessed!

[Kasey Miriam]

I love how you blended the languages! Very beautiful and sweetly written poem friend.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

Beautiful poem....I love the way you mixed the words..

[TheKratiMittal]

A beautiful integration of words.
keep writing :)

[Ruth]

Unique style hon and beautifully woven, enjoyed x

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I like your style... provocative and compelling

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was very different and creative. Keep writing. Xo Winter

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

Now I can enjoy Hindi films without subtitles, haha... just kidding. Good write up.