A GIRL IS IN MY HEART

my dream girl

A GIRL IS IN MY HEART

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

A girl is in my heart

No matter she is near or far

But I can feel her, smell her

Her warm feeling, fragment of wonder.

 

A girl is in my heart

Though she is not with me

But her play and her rage is in air

Smugly I’m smiling on my fervor.

 

A girl is in my heart

Her enchant talk make me crazy

Her poesy for what she feels

And prose fiction for my heal.

Reviews

[David Moreland]

Women do have a way with words, don't they? So easy for them to capture moments, thoughts, experiences, scenarios, and express them so eloquently. You have done it for me - better than any man can.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much sir. It is very nice to hear you. Thanks....

[Shaquana Adams]

No matter she is near or far

But I can feel her, smell her

Her warm feeling, fragment of wonder.

Sweet and lovely. Pen on :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

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Awesome :))))))))))))))))))))))))))) I love it:))))))))))))

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

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Your very welcome:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem is so sweet, and it's been described so well. loved it! :-D

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

beautiful and sweet nice write. blessings

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome as always. I been posting a bunch of new writes I hope I can see some new write's from you also soon :) blessings

[Aftab Alam]

It's what like the most- think extraordinary but talk in the voice of ordinary.well done

[Saddam]

Thank you dear very much.

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful piece hun, may you find her one day :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very sweet. Wonderful job!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear. My appreciate your words.

[Sami Khalil]

It sounded like a romantic song...All you need is some Hindi tunes...Bravo...............

[Saddam]

Thank you very much sir....
Ha.. Sometimes I use hindi words for rhythms. Glad you like that.

[Sami Khalil]

Good . You are welcome...:)................

[Penny]

Very different ferom your other poems. I like it. Do tell me when you find her

[Saddam]

Thank you sir.... She is in my heart, she is in the air I can feel her everywhere. Big thanks for you dear.

[Penny]

You are just a perfect synonym for hopeless romantic.. My pleasure btw.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much friend.