RAPUNZEL

SHE LIVE HAPPILY WITH PRINCE AFTER GLOOMS.

RAPUNZEL

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

In childhood she was stolen by a witch at knell,

Caged in only window tower, she was Rapunzel.

 

Rapunzel with beautiful twinkled eyes and long golden hair,

Witch everyday climbed through the braid into tower.

 

Lonely girl in tower used to sing for time pass,

One day,. By passing through a Prince heard a melody awaz.

 

Prince fall in l.ove in the sweetness and jingle of voice,

He eagerly starts to search her in all eight directions.

 

As a place, at last, he found witch what she did-

Later, Prince climbed at tower as the way witch had said.

 

 

Wondered Rapunzel also felled in love with Prince

The world, made bloosoms in that little fence.

 

One day Rapunzel’s tongue slipped before witch mother,

Angry hag send her into dark wood after cut charming hair.

 

Next day evil doer attacked on prince for what he had find,

Nervy prince jumped on prairie grass and become blind.

 

Blind prince wandered for Rapunzel with his white horse,

Magically one day he heard an elegy in melody voice.

 

Ravishly Prince called out for Rapunzel in all direction,

She found him but sadly there was a question.

 

They talked surprisely and wept what had done

Magic a tear drop rejuvenated Prince’s eyes;

A flood of light flushed and Rapunzel turned doll wanton

Both at white steed walked for live indulgy.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A very enjoyable read Ssadd. Aapki fairy tale seriies bahut enjoyable hai. Likhte rahiye.

[Saddam]

Glad you like it. mujhe videshi aur bhartiya fairy tales likhna hai, kya aap koi naam suggest kar sakti hai. That will help lot. thank you very much.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very nice write Interesting I love fairy tails. Blessings

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Elina]

This was lovely! I really quite enjoyed reading it. Very nicely written.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.... I feel like bird, flying penner!!!!

[Stefanie Holmes]

I love your takes on common, well known fairytales. Another good one!

~Stefanie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear..... Love your writes too.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Great write on this fairytale my dear :)

[Saddam]

Great thanks to you dear. Yours every words jingled my heart.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Glad to jingle your heart Ssaad lol.You are welcome :)

[Brook]

I watched the movie last night, it never fails to steal my heart. Damn, disney movies.
I love this, you've done a wonderful job. I love how well you've done this, i'd give you a 10/10. Considering this is my favourite fairy tale.

[Saddam]

Oh... Mai... Disney is my favourite too. I never miss any opportunity to watch. I'm overwhelmed to hear you it means i'm not wrong. Love you dear.

[Tina Louise UK]

Enjoyed this tale my friend :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Penny]

God! You know the whole story? This poem is good and the you attempted something so technical shows how bold you are. Very well done.

[Saddam]

My heart is dancing my friend with your words. आभार व्यक्त के लिए शब्द ही नहीं।

[Penny]

My pleasure completely..